Hi everyone! I've been tinkering around with this, and came up with a Planeswalker so I thought I'd share it with you all. I wanted to be a bit more dramatic than usual about "breaking out of the frame".
Whoa. That looks awesome. I love how some of the art goes behind the words, and some of it goes in front. I also love the art in general. And the card itself looks quite good, and for the most part rather balanced, although i believe the 3rd ability should be "until end of turn" or cost more loyalty, but perhaps you're not looking for functionality critique, in which case ignore my input as far as that goes.
Whoa. That looks awesome. I love how some of the art goes behind the words, and some of it goes in front. I also love the art in general. And the card itself looks quite good, and for the most part rather balanced, although i believe the 3rd ability should be "until end of turn" or cost more loyalty, but perhaps you're not looking for functionality critique, in which case ignore my input as far as that goes.
Functionality critique is fine too... I pretty specifically made the 3rd ability the way it is. The Lorwyn Planeswalkers "cast sorceries" or in Ajani's case "cast a creature", flavorwise. So I thought, "how could a Planeswalker cast an enchantment for you?"
Okay, that's cool. I got the concept now. I still feel it should cost maybe a little more, like -7 or -8. Or lower her initial loyalty... But a cool concept nonetheless.
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And the planewalkers are looking pretty nice.
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Haha that's very clever. I'm always tickled at the oxymoronic picture of Jesus as a Zombie lol. I mean, technically, yes He did come back from the dead (earning Zombiehood) but... haha c'mon seriously. It's just funny.
I also like the non-loyalty-based ability on a Planeswalker. Quite kewl.
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Avid EDH player GWUPhelddagrif----------------GWRhys, the Redeemed----------UBRLord of Tresserhorn--------XKozilek, Butcher of Truth WUBRGProgenitus---------------BGWKarador, Ghost Chieftain---URGIntet, the Dreamer---------RGWort, the Raidmother BGSavra-----------------------RGMarhault Elsdragon----------UTeferi, Mage of Zhalfir------UWHanna, Ship's Navigator BSkithiryx the Blight Dragon--RWUZedruu the Greathearted----BRelentless Rats------------BRUNicol Bolas
It would be better rules wise if it said "-6: Remove ~ from the game with 3 time counters on it. it gains suspend." Then at the top it says. when ~ comes into play, put a 10/10 indestructible white zombie token named "Jesus Christ, the Risen" into play.
This is because as of now, planeswalkers can't attack or block, which i assumed was the idea of him getting the counters was for. Also, the token would have to have a different name so they would be destroyed by the legendish plansewalker rule.
It would be better rules wise if it said "-6: Remove ~ from the game with 3 time counters on it. it gains suspend." Then at the top it says. when ~ comes into play, put a 10/10 indestructible white zombie token named "Jesus Christ, the Risen" into play.
This is because as of now, planeswalkers can't attack or block, which i assumed was the idea of him getting the counters was for. Also, the token would have to have a different name so they would be destroyed by the legendish plansewalker rule.
Planeswalker rule looks at sub-type, not card name. Hence why the walkers have their name repeated as a sub-type. [might not be called sub-type though]
Other than that, very powerful card? Also, the first ability sounds like you're trying to make it as a static ability, but really it should be triggered. "When ~ comes into play, if you didn't play it from your hand, put [blah] into play."
Also, shouldn't the last ability also say, "it has suspend 3."?
Although I'm not sure how good of an actual card it is. I'll attach him.
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BTW, where'd you find that artwork?
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And the planewalkers are looking pretty nice.
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Haha that's very clever. I'm always tickled at the oxymoronic picture of Jesus as a Zombie lol. I mean, technically, yes He did come back from the dead (earning Zombiehood) but... haha c'mon seriously. It's just funny.
I also like the non-loyalty-based ability on a Planeswalker. Quite kewl.
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^^ i thought it was an ok card ^^
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Made me giggle
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GWUPhelddagrif----------------GWRhys, the Redeemed----------UBRLord of Tresserhorn--------XKozilek, Butcher of Truth
WUBRGProgenitus---------------BGWKarador, Ghost Chieftain---URGIntet, the Dreamer---------RGWort, the Raidmother
BGSavra-----------------------RGMarhault Elsdragon----------UTeferi, Mage of Zhalfir------UWHanna, Ship's Navigator
BSkithiryx the Blight Dragon--RWUZedruu the Greathearted----BRelentless Rats------------BRUNicol Bolas
This is because as of now, planeswalkers can't attack or block, which i assumed was the idea of him getting the counters was for. Also, the token would have to have a different name so they would be destroyed by the legendish plansewalker rule.
Planeswalker rule looks at sub-type, not card name. Hence why the walkers have their name repeated as a sub-type. [might not be called sub-type though]
Other than that, very powerful card? Also, the first ability sounds like you're trying to make it as a static ability, but really it should be triggered. "When ~ comes into play, if you didn't play it from your hand, put [blah] into play."
Also, shouldn't the last ability also say, "it has suspend 3."?
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