Is there anything wrong with this card? Is my lore of Origins a bit fuzzy? Should I make it legendary? Can I add super types such as legendary and snow? Is the wording correct?
Mage-Ring Axis
Legendary Land (R)
As Center of the Mage-Rings enters the battlefield, choose a card type (Artifacts, Enchantment, Creature, Instant, Sorcery, Land, Planeswalker, and Tribal) T: Add one mana of any colour. Use this mana only to cast spells of the chosen type or activate an ability from the chosen type
Designwise this is fine. It would probably have to be a rare, because it's fairly complex in memory terms and it adds any color without ETBing tapped. However, it's certainly not overpowered, just a somewhat strong card.
Lorewise, the name is a bit off as the "center" of the Mage-Rings is perhaps too grandiose of a name for this card as that presumably contains all the leylines of a whole continent and thus a truly massive quantity of mana. Maybe something like "Mage-Ring Axis" would be a better name.
Finally, you missed a card type in the reminder text! (Technically two.)
Designwise this is fine. It would probably have to be a rare, because it's fairly complex in memory terms and it adds any color without ETBing tapped. However, it's certainly not overpowered, just a somewhat strong card.
Lorewise, the name is a bit off as the "center" of the Mage-Rings is perhaps too grandiose of a name for this card as that presumably contains all the leylines of a whole continent and thus a truly massive quantity of mana. Maybe something like "Mage-Ring Axis" would be a better name.
Finally, you missed a card type in the reminder text! (Technically two.)
I knew I had missed something! What are the card types that I missed?
Tribal is a card type, and would not work if it were a supertype. That is because the lists of subtypes are each keyed to one or more specific card types. For example, Forest is only a subtype of lands. Curse is only a subtype of enchantments. Arcane is only a subtype of instants and sorceries. Tribal was created simply in order to have a type that was allowed to share all the subtypes that creatures have.
Tribal is a card type, and would not work if it were a supertype. That is because the lists of subtypes are each keyed to one or more specific card types. For example, Forest is only a subtype of lands. Curse is only a subtype of enchantments. Arcane is only a subtype of instants and sorceries. Tribal was created simply in order to have a type that was allowed to share all the subtypes that creatures have.
Oh ok, I will change my card. Thanks for all the feedback.
No... this is too strong. It's (truly!) strictly better than Ancient Ziggurat which seems more fair, but strong. It was probably pushed a bit. Maybe there is a reason it's a $12 uncommon?
Yours needs to be Legendary or have some other drawback, like entering tapped.
No... this is too strong. It's (truly!) strictly better than Ancient Ziggurat which seems more fair, but strong. It was probably pushed a bit. Maybe there is a reason it's a $12 uncommon?
Yours needs to be Legendary or have some other drawback, like entering tapped.
ETBT would make the card sort of terrible, frankly. And I think the biggest reason Ancient Ziggurat is $12 is EDH. In competitive formats Cavern of Souls well outclasses it 9 out of 10 times.
Legendary is a fine drawback though. The ability could also be changed to "choose a card type other than creature."
No... this is too strong. It's (truly!) strictly better than Ancient Ziggurat which seems more fair, but strong. It was probably pushed a bit. Maybe there is a reason it's a $12 uncommon?
Yours needs to be Legendary or have some other drawback, like entering tapped.
ETBT would make the card sort of terrible, frankly. And I think the biggest reason Ancient Ziggurat is $12 is EDH. In competitive formats Cavern of Souls well outclasses it 9 out of 10 times.
Legendary is a fine drawback though. The ability could also be changed to "choose a card type other than creature."
I agree with Void Nothing here. ETBT would be a huge disadvantage. However, I do see The Warden's point about this being too strong. I'll make it a Legendary Land, as that might make more sense lore-wise too.
I really don't see it being too strong. While it is a better Ancient Ziggurat the truth is the other types are pretty much never going to be chosen in seriously competitive decks in any format so it's essentially just an Ancient Ziggurat that can be used for activated abilities. Every other type has too much support from other types. Artifacts (Multicolored artifact decks aren't an issue), Enchantment (Enchantress decks run the enchantress creatures + GSZ + boardwipes), Creature, Instant (they also run sorceries), Sorcery (they also run instants), Land (not casting much), Planeswalker (needs a lot of non-walker help), and Tribal (not enough tribals). Just the presence of 4x Collected Company in otherwise all creature lists kept the ziggy from seeing play sometimes.
Another thing about this card is it's not that different from making a whole list of cards like:
Land
{T}: Add one mana of any color. Spend this mana only to cast an artifact spell.
Land
{T}: Add one mana of any color. Spend this mana only to cast an enchantment spell.
Land
{T}: Add one mana of any color. Spend this mana only to cast an instant spell.
...because realistically, if you're playing this card, you've built your whole deck around a single card type and choosing the card type is a forgone conclusion. I think it will be exceedingly rare for this deck to be in a deck that actually might make two different choices depending on the situation.
Still, I think making it legendary is a good safety valve to keep it from being omnipresent in the hypothetical mana bases of future Eternal format decks.
Mage-Ring Axis
Legendary Land (R)
As Center of the Mage-Rings enters the battlefield, choose a card type (Artifacts, Enchantment, Creature, Instant, Sorcery, Land, Planeswalker, and Tribal)
T: Add one mana of any colour. Use this mana only to cast spells of the chosen type or activate an ability from the chosen type
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Lorewise, the name is a bit off as the "center" of the Mage-Rings is perhaps too grandiose of a name for this card as that presumably contains all the leylines of a whole continent and thus a truly massive quantity of mana. Maybe something like "Mage-Ring Axis" would be a better name.
Finally, you missed a card type in the reminder text! (Technically two.)
I̟̥͍̠ͅn̩͉̣͍̬͚ͅ ̬̬͖t̯̹̞̺͖͓̯̤h̘͍̬e͙̯͈̖̼̮ ̭̬f̺̲̲̪i͙͉̟̩̰r̪̝͚͈̝̥͍̝̲s̼̻͇̘̳͔ͅt̲̺̳̗̜̪̙ ̳̺̥̻͚̗ͅm̜̜̟̰͈͓͎͇o̝̖̮̝͇m̯̻̞̼̫̗͓̤e̩̯̬̮̩n͎̱̪̲̹͖t͇̖s̰̮ͅ,̤̲͙̻̭̻̯̹̰ ̖t̫̙̺̯͖͚̯ͅh͙̯̦̳̗̰̟e͖̪͉̼̯ ̪͕g̞̣͔a̗̦t̬̬͓͙̫̖̭̻e̩̻̯ ̜̖̦̖̤̭͙̬t̞̹̥̪͎͉ͅo͕͚͍͇̲͇͓̺ ̭̬͙͈̣̻t͈͍͙͓̫̖͙̩h̪̬̖̙e̗͈ ̗̬̟̞̺̤͉̯ͅa̦̯͚̙̜̮f͉͙̲̣̞̼t̪̤̞̣͚e̲͉̳̥r͇̪̙͚͓l̥̞̞͎̹̯̹ͅi͓̬f̮̥̬̞͈ͅe͎ ̟̩̤̳̠̯̩̯o̮̘̲p̟͚̣̞͉͓e͍̩̣n͔̼͕͚̜e̬̱d̼̘͎̖̹͍̮̠,͖̺̭̱̮ ̣̲͖̬̪̭̥a̪͚n̟̲̝̤̤̞̗d̘̱̗͇̮͕̳͕͔ ͖̞͉͎t̹̙͎h̰̱͉̗e̪̞̱̝̹̩ͅ ̠̱̩̭̦p̯̙e͓o̳͚̰̯̺̱̰͔̘p̬͎̱̣̼̩͇l̗̟̖͚̠e̱͉͔̱̦̬̟̙ ̖͚̪͔̼̦w̺̖̤̱e͖̗̻̦͓̖̘̜r̭̥e͔̹̫̱͕̦̰͕ ̗͔̠p̠̗͍͍̱̳̠r̰͔͎̰o͉̥͓̰͚̥s̟͚̹̱͔̣t͉̙̳̖͖̪̮r̥̘̥͙̹a͉̟̫̟̳̠̟̭t͈̜̰͈͎e̞̣̭̲̬ ͚̗̯̟͙i͍͖̰̘̦͖͉ṇ̮̻̯̦̲̩͍ ̦̮͚̫̤t͉͖̫͕ͅͅh͙̮̻̘̣̮̼e͕̺ ͙l͕̠͎̰̥i̲͓͉̲g̫̳̟͈͇̖h̠̦̖t͓̯͎̗ ̳̪̘̟̙̩̦o̫̲f̙͔̰̙̠ ̹̪̗͇̯t͖̼̼͉͖̬h̹͇̩e͚̖̺̤͉̹͕̪ ͚͓̭̝̺G͎̗̯̩o̫̯̮̟̮̳̘d̜̲͙̠-̩̳̯̲̗̜P̹̘̥͉̝h͍͈̗̖̝ͅa͍̗̮̼̗r̜̖͇̙̺a̭̺͔̞̳͈o̪̣͓̯̬͙̯̰̗h̖̦͈̥̯͔.͇̣̙̝
I knew I had missed something! What are the card types that I missed?
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I̟̥͍̠ͅn̩͉̣͍̬͚ͅ ̬̬͖t̯̹̞̺͖͓̯̤h̘͍̬e͙̯͈̖̼̮ ̭̬f̺̲̲̪i͙͉̟̩̰r̪̝͚͈̝̥͍̝̲s̼̻͇̘̳͔ͅt̲̺̳̗̜̪̙ ̳̺̥̻͚̗ͅm̜̜̟̰͈͓͎͇o̝̖̮̝͇m̯̻̞̼̫̗͓̤e̩̯̬̮̩n͎̱̪̲̹͖t͇̖s̰̮ͅ,̤̲͙̻̭̻̯̹̰ ̖t̫̙̺̯͖͚̯ͅh͙̯̦̳̗̰̟e͖̪͉̼̯ ̪͕g̞̣͔a̗̦t̬̬͓͙̫̖̭̻e̩̻̯ ̜̖̦̖̤̭͙̬t̞̹̥̪͎͉ͅo͕͚͍͇̲͇͓̺ ̭̬͙͈̣̻t͈͍͙͓̫̖͙̩h̪̬̖̙e̗͈ ̗̬̟̞̺̤͉̯ͅa̦̯͚̙̜̮f͉͙̲̣̞̼t̪̤̞̣͚e̲͉̳̥r͇̪̙͚͓l̥̞̞͎̹̯̹ͅi͓̬f̮̥̬̞͈ͅe͎ ̟̩̤̳̠̯̩̯o̮̘̲p̟͚̣̞͉͓e͍̩̣n͔̼͕͚̜e̬̱d̼̘͎̖̹͍̮̠,͖̺̭̱̮ ̣̲͖̬̪̭̥a̪͚n̟̲̝̤̤̞̗d̘̱̗͇̮͕̳͕͔ ͖̞͉͎t̹̙͎h̰̱͉̗e̪̞̱̝̹̩ͅ ̠̱̩̭̦p̯̙e͓o̳͚̰̯̺̱̰͔̘p̬͎̱̣̼̩͇l̗̟̖͚̠e̱͉͔̱̦̬̟̙ ̖͚̪͔̼̦w̺̖̤̱e͖̗̻̦͓̖̘̜r̭̥e͔̹̫̱͕̦̰͕ ̗͔̠p̠̗͍͍̱̳̠r̰͔͎̰o͉̥͓̰͚̥s̟͚̹̱͔̣t͉̙̳̖͖̪̮r̥̘̥͙̹a͉̟̫̟̳̠̟̭t͈̜̰͈͎e̞̣̭̲̬ ͚̗̯̟͙i͍͖̰̘̦͖͉ṇ̮̻̯̦̲̩͍ ̦̮͚̫̤t͉͖̫͕ͅͅh͙̮̻̘̣̮̼e͕̺ ͙l͕̠͎̰̥i̲͓͉̲g̫̳̟͈͇̖h̠̦̖t͓̯͎̗ ̳̪̘̟̙̩̦o̫̲f̙͔̰̙̠ ̹̪̗͇̯t͖̼̼͉͖̬h̹͇̩e͚̖̺̤͉̹͕̪ ͚͓̭̝̺G͎̗̯̩o̫̯̮̟̮̳̘d̜̲͙̠-̩̳̯̲̗̜P̹̘̥͉̝h͍͈̗̖̝ͅa͍̗̮̼̗r̜̖͇̙̺a̭̺͔̞̳͈o̪̣͓̯̬͙̯̰̗h̖̦͈̥̯͔.͇̣̙̝
But isn't Tribal a supertype? Or should I add in all supertypes (Legendary, Tribal, Snow, Basic)?
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Tribal is a card type, and would not work if it were a supertype. That is because the lists of subtypes are each keyed to one or more specific card types. For example, Forest is only a subtype of lands. Curse is only a subtype of enchantments. Arcane is only a subtype of instants and sorceries. Tribal was created simply in order to have a type that was allowed to share all the subtypes that creatures have.
I̟̥͍̠ͅn̩͉̣͍̬͚ͅ ̬̬͖t̯̹̞̺͖͓̯̤h̘͍̬e͙̯͈̖̼̮ ̭̬f̺̲̲̪i͙͉̟̩̰r̪̝͚͈̝̥͍̝̲s̼̻͇̘̳͔ͅt̲̺̳̗̜̪̙ ̳̺̥̻͚̗ͅm̜̜̟̰͈͓͎͇o̝̖̮̝͇m̯̻̞̼̫̗͓̤e̩̯̬̮̩n͎̱̪̲̹͖t͇̖s̰̮ͅ,̤̲͙̻̭̻̯̹̰ ̖t̫̙̺̯͖͚̯ͅh͙̯̦̳̗̰̟e͖̪͉̼̯ ̪͕g̞̣͔a̗̦t̬̬͓͙̫̖̭̻e̩̻̯ ̜̖̦̖̤̭͙̬t̞̹̥̪͎͉ͅo͕͚͍͇̲͇͓̺ ̭̬͙͈̣̻t͈͍͙͓̫̖͙̩h̪̬̖̙e̗͈ ̗̬̟̞̺̤͉̯ͅa̦̯͚̙̜̮f͉͙̲̣̞̼t̪̤̞̣͚e̲͉̳̥r͇̪̙͚͓l̥̞̞͎̹̯̹ͅi͓̬f̮̥̬̞͈ͅe͎ ̟̩̤̳̠̯̩̯o̮̘̲p̟͚̣̞͉͓e͍̩̣n͔̼͕͚̜e̬̱d̼̘͎̖̹͍̮̠,͖̺̭̱̮ ̣̲͖̬̪̭̥a̪͚n̟̲̝̤̤̞̗d̘̱̗͇̮͕̳͕͔ ͖̞͉͎t̹̙͎h̰̱͉̗e̪̞̱̝̹̩ͅ ̠̱̩̭̦p̯̙e͓o̳͚̰̯̺̱̰͔̘p̬͎̱̣̼̩͇l̗̟̖͚̠e̱͉͔̱̦̬̟̙ ̖͚̪͔̼̦w̺̖̤̱e͖̗̻̦͓̖̘̜r̭̥e͔̹̫̱͕̦̰͕ ̗͔̠p̠̗͍͍̱̳̠r̰͔͎̰o͉̥͓̰͚̥s̟͚̹̱͔̣t͉̙̳̖͖̪̮r̥̘̥͙̹a͉̟̫̟̳̠̟̭t͈̜̰͈͎e̞̣̭̲̬ ͚̗̯̟͙i͍͖̰̘̦͖͉ṇ̮̻̯̦̲̩͍ ̦̮͚̫̤t͉͖̫͕ͅͅh͙̮̻̘̣̮̼e͕̺ ͙l͕̠͎̰̥i̲͓͉̲g̫̳̟͈͇̖h̠̦̖t͓̯͎̗ ̳̪̘̟̙̩̦o̫̲f̙͔̰̙̠ ̹̪̗͇̯t͖̼̼͉͖̬h̹͇̩e͚̖̺̤͉̹͕̪ ͚͓̭̝̺G͎̗̯̩o̫̯̮̟̮̳̘d̜̲͙̠-̩̳̯̲̗̜P̹̘̥͉̝h͍͈̗̖̝ͅa͍̗̮̼̗r̜̖͇̙̺a̭̺͔̞̳͈o̪̣͓̯̬͙̯̰̗h̖̦͈̥̯͔.͇̣̙̝
Oh ok, I will change my card. Thanks for all the feedback.
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Yours needs to be Legendary or have some other drawback, like entering tapped.
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Legendary is a fine drawback though. The ability could also be changed to "choose a card type other than creature."
I̟̥͍̠ͅn̩͉̣͍̬͚ͅ ̬̬͖t̯̹̞̺͖͓̯̤h̘͍̬e͙̯͈̖̼̮ ̭̬f̺̲̲̪i͙͉̟̩̰r̪̝͚͈̝̥͍̝̲s̼̻͇̘̳͔ͅt̲̺̳̗̜̪̙ ̳̺̥̻͚̗ͅm̜̜̟̰͈͓͎͇o̝̖̮̝͇m̯̻̞̼̫̗͓̤e̩̯̬̮̩n͎̱̪̲̹͖t͇̖s̰̮ͅ,̤̲͙̻̭̻̯̹̰ ̖t̫̙̺̯͖͚̯ͅh͙̯̦̳̗̰̟e͖̪͉̼̯ ̪͕g̞̣͔a̗̦t̬̬͓͙̫̖̭̻e̩̻̯ ̜̖̦̖̤̭͙̬t̞̹̥̪͎͉ͅo͕͚͍͇̲͇͓̺ ̭̬͙͈̣̻t͈͍͙͓̫̖͙̩h̪̬̖̙e̗͈ ̗̬̟̞̺̤͉̯ͅa̦̯͚̙̜̮f͉͙̲̣̞̼t̪̤̞̣͚e̲͉̳̥r͇̪̙͚͓l̥̞̞͎̹̯̹ͅi͓̬f̮̥̬̞͈ͅe͎ ̟̩̤̳̠̯̩̯o̮̘̲p̟͚̣̞͉͓e͍̩̣n͔̼͕͚̜e̬̱d̼̘͎̖̹͍̮̠,͖̺̭̱̮ ̣̲͖̬̪̭̥a̪͚n̟̲̝̤̤̞̗d̘̱̗͇̮͕̳͕͔ ͖̞͉͎t̹̙͎h̰̱͉̗e̪̞̱̝̹̩ͅ ̠̱̩̭̦p̯̙e͓o̳͚̰̯̺̱̰͔̘p̬͎̱̣̼̩͇l̗̟̖͚̠e̱͉͔̱̦̬̟̙ ̖͚̪͔̼̦w̺̖̤̱e͖̗̻̦͓̖̘̜r̭̥e͔̹̫̱͕̦̰͕ ̗͔̠p̠̗͍͍̱̳̠r̰͔͎̰o͉̥͓̰͚̥s̟͚̹̱͔̣t͉̙̳̖͖̪̮r̥̘̥͙̹a͉̟̫̟̳̠̟̭t͈̜̰͈͎e̞̣̭̲̬ ͚̗̯̟͙i͍͖̰̘̦͖͉ṇ̮̻̯̦̲̩͍ ̦̮͚̫̤t͉͖̫͕ͅͅh͙̮̻̘̣̮̼e͕̺ ͙l͕̠͎̰̥i̲͓͉̲g̫̳̟͈͇̖h̠̦̖t͓̯͎̗ ̳̪̘̟̙̩̦o̫̲f̙͔̰̙̠ ̹̪̗͇̯t͖̼̼͉͖̬h̹͇̩e͚̖̺̤͉̹͕̪ ͚͓̭̝̺G͎̗̯̩o̫̯̮̟̮̳̘d̜̲͙̠-̩̳̯̲̗̜P̹̘̥͉̝h͍͈̗̖̝ͅa͍̗̮̼̗r̜̖͇̙̺a̭̺͔̞̳͈o̪̣͓̯̬͙̯̰̗h̖̦͈̥̯͔.͇̣̙̝
I agree with Void Nothing here. ETBT would be a huge disadvantage. However, I do see The Warden's point about this being too strong. I'll make it a Legendary Land, as that might make more sense lore-wise too.
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Land
{T}: Add one mana of any color. Spend this mana only to cast an artifact spell.
Land
{T}: Add one mana of any color. Spend this mana only to cast an enchantment spell.
Land
{T}: Add one mana of any color. Spend this mana only to cast an instant spell.
...because realistically, if you're playing this card, you've built your whole deck around a single card type and choosing the card type is a forgone conclusion. I think it will be exceedingly rare for this deck to be in a deck that actually might make two different choices depending on the situation.
Still, I think making it legendary is a good safety valve to keep it from being omnipresent in the hypothetical mana bases of future Eternal format decks.
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