You have really greedy mana requirements that you're usually not going to hit, fwiw.
You should play more 3s and 4s of cards and way fewer singletons (other than, say, Marchesa, and even then that should be a 2-of or so considering she appears to be crucial).
Soul Net doesn't make sense here (no lifegain triggers or way to use it to gain huge amounts of life at once) and Consulate Skygate can't even benefit from dethrone - both bad choices that you ought to cut.
Your whole deck idea seems to revolve around the magic idea that Marchesa, the Black Rose will be remain alive for a long time on your board. That will most likely not be the case. Your deck entirely revolves around her so your opponent will be quick to kill her and your entire deck is one Swords to Plowshares away from being slowed down dramatically. You should play Marchesa but she shouldnt be your only way to abuse your deck...there are other ways to abuse undying creatures (Retribution of the Ancients is quite good at keeping your undying creatures alive, Purphoros, god of the forge would deal heavy damage since you have a lot of creature come into play triggers, Impact Tremors does something similar, sacrifice outlets Helm of Possession, Altar of Dementia, etc...can also be interesting to abuse) and you should play other cards as well
Swarm of Bloodflies costs way too much for the benefit it brings to your deck. Rot Shambler or Rockslide Elemental do the same work but cost much less. If you are looking to play something expensive for this role, Algae Gharial would be much easier to keep alive since it has shroud.
Soul net is useless...gaining life won't prevent you from losing the game...it will only make it last a bit longer before you die...dont waste your mana on this. Zulaport Cutthroat will make a better job in your deck.
Demonic Tutor or Mastermind's Acquisition allow you to look for other cards if Marchesa isnt what you need at the time. Acquisition even allow you to build a sideboard full of options that could be good for you.
Consulate Skygate isnt good in your deck. You have tons of small creatures so you have no reason to fear for your early game defense. You should add some creature removal if you want ways to deal with flying creatures.
Ion storm is costy to activate, Retribution of the Ancients will run much more smoothly...especially if you run some Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth to ensure that you have black mana. It can also save more than one creature with just one black mana.
Since we are in the "multiplayer" section, let me tell you that your mana would be better fixed with some good multiplayer lands (Exotic Orchard, lands from Battlebond (Morphic Pool, Luxury Suite, etc...)
Also, Animate Dead is a clear upgrade over Raise Dead...your creature gets directly into play and you can animate creatures in your opponent's graveyard. Necromancy is another very interesting option.
1 Swarm of Bloodflies
4 Butcher Ghoul
2 Flayer of the Hatebound
4 Young Wolf
4 Zulaport Cutthroat
1 Hound of Griselbrand
1 Vorapede
1 Strangleroot Geist
1 Dimir House Guard
1 Marchesa, the Black Rose
1 Consulate Skygate
1 Aid from the Cowl
1 Ion Strom
1 Dictate of Erebos
1 Unbridled Growth
Sorcery
1 Bone Splinters
2 Raise Dead
1 Bontu's Last Reckoning
Instant
1 Altar's Reap
1 Fog
2 Plummet
Artifacts
1 Soul Net
2 Skullclamp
5 Forest
4 Mountain
7 Swamps
2 Evolving Wilds
1 Desert of the Mindful
1 Salt Marsh
1 Dimir Guildgate
1 Gruul Guildgate
1 Izzet Guildgate
1 Simic Guildgate
You should play more 3s and 4s of cards and way fewer singletons (other than, say, Marchesa, and even then that should be a 2-of or so considering she appears to be crucial).
Soul Net doesn't make sense here (no lifegain triggers or way to use it to gain huge amounts of life at once) and Consulate Skygate can't even benefit from dethrone - both bad choices that you ought to cut.
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Swarm of Bloodflies costs way too much for the benefit it brings to your deck. Rot Shambler or Rockslide Elemental do the same work but cost much less. If you are looking to play something expensive for this role, Algae Gharial would be much easier to keep alive since it has shroud.
Soul net is useless...gaining life won't prevent you from losing the game...it will only make it last a bit longer before you die...dont waste your mana on this. Zulaport Cutthroat will make a better job in your deck.
Demonic Tutor or Mastermind's Acquisition allow you to look for other cards if Marchesa isnt what you need at the time. Acquisition even allow you to build a sideboard full of options that could be good for you.
Consulate Skygate isnt good in your deck. You have tons of small creatures so you have no reason to fear for your early game defense. You should add some creature removal if you want ways to deal with flying creatures.
Ion storm is costy to activate, Retribution of the Ancients will run much more smoothly...especially if you run some Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth to ensure that you have black mana. It can also save more than one creature with just one black mana.
Unbridled Growth does not increase your total of mana...go with Sakura-Tribe Elder instead if you fear for your mana colors.
Bone Splinters and Plummet are bad removal cards. Upgrade to stronger stuff. Hero's Downfall, Maelstrom Pulse, Putrefy, Blasphemous Act, etc...
Add at least 1 Island to search for in your deck.
Since we are in the "multiplayer" section, let me tell you that your mana would be better fixed with some good multiplayer lands (Exotic Orchard, lands from Battlebond (Morphic Pool, Luxury Suite, etc...)
The GGG of your Vorapede will be very hard to reach if you do not play filter lands (Twilight Mire, Fire-Lit Thicket, etc...)