I have not posted here in quite a bit...these are some cards from some sets I was making and one set I am making. As much feedback as possible would be appreciated. Thanks a bunch!
Pack Betrayer1 (Uncommon)
Creature-Wolf
When Pack Betrayer comes into play, sacrifice a creature.
If the creature sacrificed this way was green, each opponent sacrifices a creature.
3/2
Stone Death Shaman 2BBG (Rare)
Creature-Gorgon Shaman
Deathtouch, trample
Whenever Stone Death Shaman deals combat damage to an opponent, return target creature from your graveyard to play. “Reincarnation? If I had to go through a whole ‘nother life, I’d kill myself right now.”
—Verdestru, Devkarin Hunter
4/4
Oneiro's Paradox 1UB (Rare)
Enchantment
Spells you play have "as an additional cost to play this spell, discard a card."
Whenever an opponent plays a spell, draw a card.
Goblin Saltblaster RW (Uncommon)
Creature-Goblin Soldier
Radiance— R, T, Sacrifice Goblin Saltblaster: Goblin Saltblaster deals 2 damage to target creature and each other creature that shares a color with it.
Radiance— W, T, Sacrifice Goblin Saltblaster: Prevent the next 2 damage that would be dealt to target creature and each other creature that shares a color with it this turn.
2/2
Xazox's Gambit3UR (Rare)
Enchantment
Whenever you play a spell, draw a card.
Whenever an opponent plays a spell, put a Niv counter on Xazox’s Gambit.
The next time you would draw a card, if there are one or more Niv counters on Xazox’s Gambit, remove a Niv counter instead. “Never challenge an Izzet Magelord to a race between minds.”
—Ligriv, Ravnican Tour Guide
Umbriel, Divine Rivanim WWBB (Rare)
Legendary Creature-Angel
Flying
Whenever a nonlegendary creature becomes tapped, it becomes a 1/1 white and black spirit and loses all abilities. “Bow down, and you will know the glory of Orzhova!”
-The White Raven 2/3
Simic Biometal 3 (Rare)
Artifact-Equipment
Equip GUU
If equipped creature would be put into a graveyard from play, unequip it, and that creature becomes a copy of Simic Biometal. Put a goo counter on it. 1GU: Simic Biometal becomes a copy of a creature that copied any permanent named Simic Biometal until end of turn. “Great minds think identically!”
Autumn's Blood (Rare)
Land Creature-Elemental
If Autumn’s Blood would come into play, you may pay 3RG. If you don’t, put it into it’s owner’s graveyard instead.
Whenever Autumn’s Blood or another land comes into play, Autumn’s Blood deals 1 damage to each creature and each player.
Whenever Autumn’s Blood or another land is put into a graveyard from play, Autumn’s Blood deals 2 damage to each creature and each player.
4/4
Trial By Water 3WU (Rare)
Enchantment
When Trial By Water comes into play, choose an opponent.
At the beginning of that player's upkeep, that player taps an untapped creature they control.
At the end of your turn, put a -1/-1 counter on each tapped creature.
Phantom Dryad 4GW (Rare)
Creature-Dryad Spirit
Protection from Black
Phantom Dryad comes into play with three +1/+1 counters on it. If damage would be dealt to Phantom Dryad, prevent that damage. Remove a +1/+1 counter from Phantom Dryad.
Whenever a +1/+1 counter is removed from Phantom Dryad, put a 1/1 green Saproling creature token into play.
Phantom Dryad gets +1/+1 for each other creature you control.
1/0
Trial By Fire 3RW (Rare)
Sorcery
Tap target creature. That creature deals damage equal to its converted mana cost to each other creature, then deals damage equal to its toughness to its controller, then deals damage equal to its power to itself.
Ancient Beginnings GU (Rare)
Instant
Draw X cards, where X is the number of lands that have come into play this turn.
Hi, I have a question about a scenario that could be a potential problem for me in the future.
Let's say I have a 4/4 Kavu Predator. My opponent plays Sudden Death. Since from what I understand (which isn't anywhere near judge level), mana sources are the fastest things in the game next to conceding and removing your pants. So if I tap my Grove of the Burwillows (which I'm pretty sure tapping for mana doesn't use the stack), does the Kavu become a 5/5 and avoid death because the triggered ability came from a mana source?
Updated again with Mat' Selesnya. This is the last image that I'm going to post on this thread I think...when I'm ready, I'll create a thread in the custom sets sub-forum. All comments are still welcome here!
Added Rakdos...sorry about the crappy flipped picture. Also, after the next card I think I'll move this thread to the actual "sets" forum. Comments are always welcome!
Completely remade Cizzy (wasn't happy with the activated abilities) and added Vuliev. Also, in my version of the story, I'm going to have Simic practice bad medicine in secret lol, but thanks for the reminder. I'll keep the rest of his guild less cytoplastyish.
Updated with the Simic Parun. Also, thanks for all your comments! I'm really having fun with all this, although I just don't know how to make Niv any simpler.
Voila!: I think I fixed Szadek, but I don't understand what you mean for Svogthos...
Hi...I'm new around here, but have lurked for quite a while now. I'm just going to use this space to post some of my custom card ideas...this particular thread is for an alternate Ravnica block that takes place just predating the signing of the Guildpact. If you have any comments, criticisms, or suggestions, please feel free to put your two cents in. Corrections on templating would be especially helpful. Thanks!
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Rakdos the Desecrater
:2mana::symb::symb::symr::symr:
Legendary Creature-Demon Lord
Flying, trample
Sacrifice all creatures you control: Return Rakdos the Desecrater from your graveyard to play. You may play this ability only if Rakdos is in your graveyard and if you control six or more creatures.
Whenever Rakdos deals combat damage to a player and you control no other creatures, each player loses the game. (This effect results in a draw.) 7/6
High Judge, Azor I
:2mana::symw::symu:
Legendary Creature-Human Judge
Vigilance
All spells and activated abilities cost 3 more to play.
All players have no maximum hand size.
3/3
Cisarzim, Lord of Chaos
:3mana::symr::symr::symg::symg:
Legendary Creature-Giant Cyclops
Trample, haste
Cisarzim, Lord of Chaos can't be countered.
Cisarzim can't be the target of spells or abilities.
All creatures you control have Fury (Creatures with power less than this creature's power can't block it.) 8/8
Niv-Mizzet, Pyro-Savant
:4mana::symu::symr:
Legendary Creatuer-Dragon Wizard
Flying
:symur:: If a spell or ability would target Niv-Mizzet, Pyro-Savant, reselect it's target at random.
Whenever you play a spell, you may pay :symu::symr:. If you do, Niv-Mizzet deals 2 damage divided as you choose between any number of target creatures and/or players. Draw a card.
4/4
Simic, Biomancer Prodigy
:3mana::symg::symu:
Legendary Creatuer-Vedalken Mutant
:1mana::symg:, :symtap:: Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature without trample. That creature gains trample.
:1mana::symu:, :symtap:: Put a +2/+2 counter on target creature with trample and without flying. That creature gains flying.
:1mana::symg::symu:, :symtap:: Put a +3/+3 counter on target creature with trample and flying. That creature can't be the target of spells or abilities. (These effects don't end at end of turn.)
Pack Betrayer 1
Creature-Wolf
When Pack Betrayer comes into play, sacrifice a creature.
If the creature sacrificed this way was green, each opponent sacrifices a creature.
3/2
Stone Death Shaman 2BBG (Rare)
Creature-Gorgon Shaman
Deathtouch, trample
Whenever Stone Death Shaman deals combat damage to an opponent, return target creature from your graveyard to play.
“Reincarnation? If I had to go through a whole ‘nother life, I’d kill myself right now.”
—Verdestru, Devkarin Hunter
4/4
Oneiro's Paradox 1UB (Rare)
Enchantment
Spells you play have "as an additional cost to play this spell, discard a card."
Whenever an opponent plays a spell, draw a card.
Goblin Saltblaster RW (Uncommon)
Creature-Goblin Soldier
Radiance— R, T, Sacrifice Goblin Saltblaster: Goblin Saltblaster deals 2 damage to target creature and each other creature that shares a color with it.
Radiance— W, T, Sacrifice Goblin Saltblaster: Prevent the next 2 damage that would be dealt to target creature and each other creature that shares a color with it this turn.
2/2
Xazox's Gambit 3UR (Rare)
Enchantment
Whenever you play a spell, draw a card.
Whenever an opponent plays a spell, put a Niv counter on Xazox’s Gambit.
The next time you would draw a card, if there are one or more Niv counters on Xazox’s Gambit, remove a Niv counter instead.
“Never challenge an Izzet Magelord to a race between minds.”
—Ligriv, Ravnican Tour Guide
Umbriel, Divine Rivanim WWBB (Rare)
Legendary Creature-Angel
Flying
Whenever a nonlegendary creature becomes tapped, it becomes a 1/1 white and black spirit and loses all abilities.
“Bow down, and you will know the glory of Orzhova!”
-The White Raven
2/3
Simic Biometal 3 (Rare)
Artifact-Equipment
Equip GUU
If equipped creature would be put into a graveyard from play, unequip it, and that creature becomes a copy of Simic Biometal. Put a goo counter on it.
1GU: Simic Biometal becomes a copy of a creature that copied any permanent named Simic Biometal until end of turn.
“Great minds think identically!”
Autumn's Blood (Rare)
Land Creature-Elemental
If Autumn’s Blood would come into play, you may pay 3RG. If you don’t, put it into it’s owner’s graveyard instead.
Whenever Autumn’s Blood or another land comes into play, Autumn’s Blood deals 1 damage to each creature and each player.
Whenever Autumn’s Blood or another land is put into a graveyard from play, Autumn’s Blood deals 2 damage to each creature and each player.
4/4
Trial By Water 3WU (Rare)
Enchantment
When Trial By Water comes into play, choose an opponent.
At the beginning of that player's upkeep, that player taps an untapped creature they control.
At the end of your turn, put a -1/-1 counter on each tapped creature.
Phantom Dryad 4GW (Rare)
Creature-Dryad Spirit
Protection from Black
Phantom Dryad comes into play with three +1/+1 counters on it. If damage would be dealt to Phantom Dryad, prevent that damage. Remove a +1/+1 counter from Phantom Dryad.
Whenever a +1/+1 counter is removed from Phantom Dryad, put a 1/1 green Saproling creature token into play.
Phantom Dryad gets +1/+1 for each other creature you control.
1/0
Trial By Fire 3RW (Rare)
Sorcery
Tap target creature. That creature deals damage equal to its converted mana cost to each other creature, then deals damage equal to its toughness to its controller, then deals damage equal to its power to itself.
Ancient Beginnings GU (Rare)
Instant
Draw X cards, where X is the number of lands that have come into play this turn.
The Silhana of Selesnya
The Devkarin of Golgari
The unnamed race of elves that has gone extinct, save for Momir Vig.
Edit: Ah, thank you also.
Let's say I have a 4/4 Kavu Predator. My opponent plays Sudden Death. Since from what I understand (which isn't anywhere near judge level), mana sources are the fastest things in the game next to conceding and removing your pants. So if I tap my Grove of the Burwillows (which I'm pretty sure tapping for mana doesn't use the stack), does the Kavu become a 5/5 and avoid death because the triggered ability came from a mana source?
Voila!: I think I fixed Szadek, but I don't understand what you mean for Svogthos...
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Rakdos the Desecrater
:2mana::symb::symb::symr::symr:
Legendary Creature-Demon Lord
Flying, trample
Sacrifice all creatures you control: Return Rakdos the Desecrater from your graveyard to play. You may play this ability only if Rakdos is in your graveyard and if you control six or more creatures.
Whenever Rakdos deals combat damage to a player and you control no other creatures, each player loses the game. (This effect results in a draw.)
7/6
High Judge, Azor I
:2mana::symw::symu:
Legendary Creature-Human Judge
Vigilance
All spells and activated abilities cost 3 more to play.
All players have no maximum hand size.
3/3
Cisarzim, Lord of Chaos
:3mana::symr::symr::symg::symg:
Legendary Creature-Giant Cyclops
Trample, haste
Cisarzim, Lord of Chaos can't be countered.
Cisarzim can't be the target of spells or abilities.
All creatures you control have Fury (Creatures with power less than this creature's power can't block it.)
8/8
Niv-Mizzet, Pyro-Savant
:4mana::symu::symr:
Legendary Creatuer-Dragon Wizard
Flying
:symur:: If a spell or ability would target Niv-Mizzet, Pyro-Savant, reselect it's target at random.
Whenever you play a spell, you may pay :symu::symr:. If you do, Niv-Mizzet deals 2 damage divided as you choose between any number of target creatures and/or players. Draw a card.
4/4
Simic, Biomancer Prodigy
:3mana::symg::symu:
Legendary Creatuer-Vedalken Mutant
:1mana::symg:, :symtap:: Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature without trample. That creature gains trample.
:1mana::symu:, :symtap:: Put a +2/+2 counter on target creature with trample and without flying. That creature gains flying.
:1mana::symg::symu:, :symtap:: Put a +3/+3 counter on target creature with trample and flying. That creature can't be the target of spells or abilities.
(These effects don't end at end of turn.)