Quote from N00bsauce Guildmageok well you asked for it....so here it is. I hate cards that have a Cumulative Upkeep with a fiery passion thats why i have waited for someone to comment this card so i wouldnt have to since i know my opinion would be quite bias'ed but fine since i read your rant ill talk about
it costs low for an enchant that does nothing unless you pay the CU....now from my little expierence with these cards, any card that has a CU is supposed to have a ability on itself, the only reason for the CU is so you keep it in play now maybe im wrong like i said i hate CU cards and i never played with them, the ability itself has synergy since naturally you would run green and blue together if your using this card and would pay both costs so u can draw a card and place the discarded card if it was good ontop of your lib if it was a creature.
There thats your critique heres my card
Shasazaki, the Lone Samurai
Legendary Creature-Human Samurai
When ~ would be put into the graveyard from play you may chose to remove it from the game instead. If you do then put 5 1/1 Samurai tokens into play with haste and there is another combat phase.
"Though I battle alone, when I leave this world, many will take my place.-Shasazaki"
Quote from void_nothingThe "creature" restriction of Wake of Rebirth's ability is probably unnecessary, considering it has a two-mana CU cost.
Shasazaki - Absurd mana cost. Also, "Bushido +1/+2"? You're doing it wrong. Having a red 4/5 for no compelling reason is weird. Let's reformat this card.
Shasazaki, Lone Samurai 4RR
Legendary Creature - Human Samurai
When Shasazaki, Lone Samurai is put into a graveyard from play, if it's your turn, remove it from the game. If you do, put five 1/1 red Warrior creature tokens into play and there is an additional combat phase followed by an additional main phase after this one.
Five seems a little bit excessive. Maybe tone that down to four or three tokens.
Quote from jdurham6I'm not sure about the protection from blue, but that seems fine.
You may want to change the tap effect to target creature, since black traditionally has trouble dealing with artifacts and enchantments.
Here's my card:
Target opponent looks at the top five cards of his or her library and puts them back in any order. That player shuffles his or her library.
Draw a card.
Note: this card comes from a custom un-set that we are designing, so yes, the first ability is supposed to be mostly pointless
Quote from N00bsauce Guildmageive been home all day sick so i decided to check in on my card..
ok....Tease....it costs little...but i would change it to a Sorcery insteaed of an instant...and make it cost 1u instead of just U
idk why but im in a legendary creature mood
Death-Knight Captain Vargas
Legendary Creature-Zombie Knight
Protection from white
When ~ comes into play put 2 1/1 zombie tokens into play