Could always be "..., put a 2/2 green Wolf creature token onto the battlefield under your control and target player puts the top ten cards of his or her library into his or her graveyard."
That makes it line up a little better! (Especially if I drop "ever" from "whenever") Here's both, for what it's worth:
"10" should be spelled out instead of written in numerical form. That adds a whole letter of space. And maybe it should just be "put a" instead of "you put a". Pollenbright wings
Edit 2: Though that doesn't sound right when coupled with the rest of the text, so maybe "you put a" is correct.
Yeah, I realized the 10 just a moment ago. It doesn't bump the formatting at all, sadface. Yeah, I'm not really sure on the "you put a", because Stuff like Nomads' Assembly just starts "Put", yet Sword of Fire and Ice is "You draw a card". The "You" with creature tokens seems to only be if it's "You may put", otherwise it just seems to be "put", from what I'm seeing now as I poke around.
I think that image confirms 8 lines of text total.
It would still be "his or her". Look at Tome Scour.
Good point!
Here's what I've got now, but it doesn't loo to line up at all, lol. (The ends of the line are almost opposite of what the image looks like, but maybe that's MSE?)
(er, pretend it says "into" not "in".)
I love being obsessed over things as simple as wording.
That is definitely a bit closer, but the first line of the second section ought to be longer than the second. There's also supposed to be only four lines. This is a dilly of a pickle...
You know, I just realized on the old swords, you weren't given the option, and I added "may" to the effects. Also, are you sure it's only four? It looks like it might possibly be five to me, but that teeny picture has it very hard to tell!
I think I might have the templating a bit off, because this doesn't match the silhouette of the card from the FtV:R box image.
-snip image-
I think I got the templating a little more accurate (just from moving stuff around, still can't get the last line quite to the end)... from what I can see on that blurry image
In the past, the preview card has had the same art as the ones from the set. (See Hellkite Overlord)
That makes it line up a little better! (Especially if I drop "ever" from "whenever") Here's both, for what it's worth:
"When", "Whenever"
Yeah, I realized the 10 just a moment ago. It doesn't bump the formatting at all, sadface. Yeah, I'm not really sure on the "you put a", because Stuff like Nomads' Assembly just starts "Put", yet Sword of Fire and Ice is "You draw a card". The "You" with creature tokens seems to only be if it's "You may put", otherwise it just seems to be "put", from what I'm seeing now as I poke around.
Good point!
Here's what I've got now, but it doesn't loo to line up at all, lol. (The ends of the line are almost opposite of what the image looks like, but maybe that's MSE?)
(er, pretend it says "into" not "in".)
I love being obsessed over things as simple as wording.
I definitely think I see five: (maybe I'm mistaken though?)
ShadowFenril: Perhaps it's 'target player', and then 'into his or her'?
You know, I just realized on the old swords, you weren't given the option, and I added "may" to the effects. Also, are you sure it's only four? It looks like it might possibly be five to me, but that teeny picture has it very hard to tell!
I think I got the templating a little more accurate (just from moving stuff around, still can't get the last line quite to the end)... from what I can see on that blurry image